It isn't the mountains ahead that wear you out, it's the grain of sand in your shoe

I INTRO A Topic Sentence: You can hear wise saying everywhere. 1 Discussion: Beauty is in the eyes is the beholder. 2 Discussion: what doesn’t kill you will make you stronger. B Gov idea: Wise Saying : It isn’t the mountains ahead that wear you out, it’s the grain of sand in your shoe. C “Three” part thesis statement: List only your first 2 proofs 1: bettering yourself is a challenge take takes a lot of little steps. 2: Getting an education II 1st Major proof: Beginning with a topic sentence: Overcoming changes is a big changlle, but the hardest part is all the little steps you have to take to overcome the change. A: Bettering yourself is a challenge that has many steps. 1: Addiction is a big challenge to better your life; that takes many little steps. 2: It’s easy to say you’re going to stop your addition, but the steps to overcome the addiction are the hardest part. B: A lot of people are addicted to smoking. 1: Smoking is hard thing to quite not many people can do it. 2: My dad stopped smoked for eighteen years and now he has decided smoking cigars are a good idea.III 2ND Major proof: topic sentence: Education is a change in your life that has many steps. A: farther your education and going to college; is a step to better your life. 1: People will say I’m going to go to college but never sign up for classes. 2: College is expensive so a lot of people will us that as an excuse. B: College will help have a better future. 1: Going to college will help you get a job you love, so you won’t have to be 2: Having a college education can pervade your family a better life.