C6 : COMPLETING BUSINESS MESSAGES

REVISING YOUR MESSAGES : EVALUATING THE FIRST DRAFT

REVISING YOUR MESSAGES : EVALUATING THE FIRST DRAFT

EVALUATE

CONTENT

TONE

STYLE

ORGANIZATION

EVALUATING, EDITING AND REVISING THE WORK OF OTHERS

CHECKPOINT

PURPOSE & TARGET

Subtopic

AUDIENCE NEED

TONE & CLEAR

CONCISE

REVISING TO IMPROVE  READIBILITY

REVISING TO IMPROVE READIBILITY

VARYING SENTENCE LENGTH

KEEP PARAGRAPH SHORT

BOOST READABILITY

EMPHASIZE IDEAS

STRESS TRANSITION

USING LIST FOR CLARIFY & EMPHASIZE

SET OF IMPORTANT IDEAS

SEPARATE THE ITEMS

INTRODUCE CLEARLY

FORMAT SHOULD BE PARALLEL

ADD HEADINGS & SUBHEADINGS

FUNCTIONS

1) ORGANIZATION

2) ATTENTION

3) CONNECTION

CATEGORIES

DESCRIPTIVE

INFORMATIVE

EDITING FOR CLARITY & CONCISENESS

EDITING FOR CLARITY & CONCISENESS

CONCISENESS

DELETE UNNECESSARY

ELIMINATE REDUNDANCIES

RECAST STARTERS

SHORTEN WORDS

CLARIFY

BREAK UP

REWRITE

IMPOSE PARALLELISM

REWORD

REPLACE CAMOUFLAGED

CLARIFY

C6 : CREATING BUSINESS MESSAGES

REVISING YOUR MESSAGE : EVALUATING THE FIRST DARFT

REVISING TO IMPROVE READABILITY

EDITING FOR CLARITY & CONCISENESS

PRODUCING YOUR MESSAGE

PROOFREADING YOUR MESSAGE

DISTRIBUTING YOUR MESSAGE

DISTRIBUTING YOUR MESSAGES

DISTRIBUTING YOUR MESSAGES

THE OBVIOUS CHOICE

PLAN DISTRIBUTION CAREFULLY

COST

CONVENIENCE

TIME

SECURITY & PRIVACY

PROOFREADING YOUR MESSAGES

PROOFREADING YOUR MESSAGES

TYPES OF DETAILS TO LOOK FOR ERRORS

WRITING

MISSING ELEMENTS

DESIGN,FORMAT,PROGRAMMING MISTAKES

TIPS FOR SUCCESSFUL PROOFREADING

MULTIPLE PASSES

USE PERCEPTUAL TRICKS

DOUBLE CHECK

VIGILANT

FOCUS

TAKE TIME

PRODUCING YOUR MESSAGES

PRODUCING YOUR MESSAGES

DESGIN FOR READING

MAIN ELEMENT

CONSISTENCY

BALANCE

RESTRAINT

DETAIL

TECHNIQUES

WHITE SPACE

MARGINS

TYPEFACES/FONTS

TYPE STYLES

FORMATING

FORMAL LETTER

7 STEPS

FORMAL MEMO

3 STEPS

DESIGNING FOR MOBILE DEVICES

SMALL CHUNKS

USE OF WHITE SPACE

SIMPLE FORMAT

CONSIDER LAYOUTS

PRODUCTION QUALITY