Catégories : Tous - redemption - addiction - prison - accident

par Jair Mejía Il y a 8 années

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Story Map (THE FLY)

In the midst of a turbulent flight to Atlanta, the destinies of William Whip, a pilot struggling with addiction, and Nicole Maggen, an independent yet troubled photographer, intersect dramatically.

Story Map (THE FLY)

The fly

Type in the title of your story.


To name your story, you have to think of the overall message and what you want your audience to understand from the story. Also, make it relevant and easy to remember. Examples:
- theme: Audition, by Barbara Walters;
- main character's name: Robinson Crusoe, by Daniel Defoe;
- use of gerund to describe the plot: Waiting for Godot, by Samuel Beckett;
- time or numbers: 1984, by George Orwell;
- line that best describes the theme: Pride and Prejudice, by Jane Austen;
- key object or possessive in the story: Charlotte's Web, by E.B. White;
- story setting: Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea, by Jules Verne

CLOSING

OUTCOME

The outcome


This is the closure section of the story.

willian ultimately could meet his son who visited him in prison and the son asks who is? and William replied that was a good question
enter prison made willian give him change his life and leave his obsession to alcohol

Brief ending for your story


Try answering these questions in order for you to come up with a closure:
- Have all problems been solved?
- Is it clear what happens with all your characters in the story?
- Has the challenged transformed your main character?
- How do the characters feel in the end?

CLIMAX

The climax


This is the moment when the main character passes by the last obstacle and finally faces its great challenge.

willian's character had to go through a lot to overcome every obstacle that had to face one of them was accepting the blame for the accident

How does your main character finally solve the problem?


The climax usually follows one of these patterns:
- Realization (the character puts together all the pieces of the puzzle and solves the mystery);
- Resolution (the character needs to transforms itself during the confrontation);
- Choice (the character has to make a difficult choice).

MIDDLE

OBSTACLES

The obstacles


There wouldn't be any tension and excitement in your story if there weren't any obstacles that get in your character's way.

both personal problems was a big problem for everyone overcome

What stands in the way of your character to accomplish his goal?


Type in the obstacles.Usually, the obstacles come in sets of three. This way, your story can evolve and be exciting for your audience.

can't swim very well, shark invasion, sea stormstrong allergy to dogs, pack of wolves, hunters invasionloses coin, finds coin but it is soon stolen, hard time deciding whether to return or not to his real lifereceives medication, fight with dangerous patient, someone reveals his escape planmemory loss, no support from family, the game takes place earlier than expected
MOTIVATION

The motivation


Your character(s) need(s) motivation in order to solve the challenge(s).

Willian was the motivation to meet nicole since she was his support

Why does your character need to confront this challenge?


Why does your character need to confront this challenge? What does he/she expect to accomplish by solving it?

will marry in 3 dayshe/she loves the childcan fix the mistakes in the pastwants to help other misplace patients escapechance to win the World Chess Championship
CHALLENGE

The challenge


Each story has a main character and that character usually needs to solve a problem or challenge.The character's challenge is the one that creates tension throughout the story.

Challenge

Challenges


Type in any other challenges which the main character or other characters in the story need to face.

the addictions problems of the main characters

What is the main challenge in your story?


Type it in.Try to come up with an interesting challenge with which the character needs to struggle.

wakes up one morning in the middle of the oceandiscovers that his/her child turns into a werewolf at nightis sent back in time after rubbing an old coinis misplaced in a mental institutionbecomes blind before the most important game in his career

BEGINNING

SETTING
Sensory detail

Sensory details


Sensory details are important because they create depth in your setting. Type in the aromas, sounds, sights, things related to touch, smell and taste.

smell of fresh breadscent of freshly cut grassrain falling onto the windshieldbirds singingfluffy cloudsrural hillssticky honey on the tableclothstinging moustache
Weather

Weather


The weather is an important element in your story because it can highly influence the ambience in the story and the mood of the characters.

suspense and drama

What are the environmental reactions?


And what about the character(s)'s emotional responses to these weather conditions? Type them in.

lonelinessblissexcitementangerfrustrationfearloss of propertyloss of life

rains

Think of weather elements


Type in the ones that will be enclosed in your story line.

rainbowthunderlightningsnowrainwindhailmistfrosthoarfrosthumidity

strong winds

Catastrophic event


Does your story take place during catastrophic weather?

hurricanetornadotsunamiearthquakeflooddrought
season occurs in the stage of strong winds

What's the season in which the story takes place?


Each season has unique weather and events, whose description can also enrich your text.

SpringSummerAutumnWinter
It occurs in the air on a flight to atlanta

Time of day


What time of the day does the story takes place?

dawnmorningafternooneveningduskmidnighttwilightbreakfastlunchdinnersunrisesunsetfull moon
in a hotel in orlando

Where does the story takes place?


Your story can take place wherever your imagination will take you to.

in a hospitalinside a carat the cinemain a restaurantat the zooin spacein an elevatorin an enchanted forestin the palm of your handin a haunted palaceinside an aquariumAncient GreeceBermuda Triangle
CHARACTERS
Nicole Maggen

the principal main of she is leave addictions

independent

aggressive

irresponsible

She is a photographer and massage she has problems with drugs.

William Whip

Character's name


Type in the name of your character.

the principal main goal of character is be a good pilot and let addictions

Main goal


What is your character's main goal?

fight Evilfind lovedefeat his/her enemyrule the worldmake friendstime travelmake an awesome discovery

Personality

Is a addict

Is a pilot

laughed

Character traits


Which traits best describe the character's personality?

introvertedloyalkindindependentquick-thinkingadventuresomeidealisticsweet-naturedcalmrisk-takercreativewittystrictfussyweirdclumsyharshaggressivecarelessclingingcowardlycrueldeceitfulimpulsive

the character is laughed

Type of character


Decide what type of character he/ she is.

Protagonist (main character): Harry PotterAntagonist (main character's opponent): Lord VoldemortFlat (stereotypical character): Mr. Filch from Harry Potter sagaRound (his/ her personality develops throughout the story): Hermione GrangerStatic (his/ her personality doesn't evolve throughout the story): Professor McGonagollDynamic (dramatical change in personality): Neville LongbottomConfidant (the main character trusts him/ her): Ronald WeasleyFoil (contrasting character who enhances the personality of another character): Draco Malfoy