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What I learned at the gold rush.
All the things I did during the gold rush.
Paning for gold
How to pan for gold.
Get some sand for your pan.
Put some some water in the pan and swir it around in circles.
And then you will see the water seperate the sand in a small pile.
What you do after
You look vary care fully for any sighs of gold flacks.
When you do that do gently move the gold to see if it was just sand and put it in water.
And then shake the bottle and if you hear the the gold fastly moveing and you have to hear it to see if its real.
I don't have anymore.
I don't have anymore to say thats all that i did on the gold rush.
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Mining
Cookie mining
Today in are class we went mineing but not for gold for cokies.
The hole point of this was to try to get all the choclite chips out of the hole cokie.
Me and my group had gottan more cholites out ok the cokies than anyone else.
I don't have anymore.
I don't have anything else for cookie mining sorry. Beause thats alll I did when cooki mining.
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Now i'm gonna tell you about the gold pouches I made.
Gold pouches
How to make them
The first thing you need to do get a bunch of lether and lether strings and 4 beeds.
You tie the sring on the lether in a species way I can't explain.
After that you need to get the you beeds tied on the gold pouch.
Beeds
The color of the beeds are gonna be the town your gonna be in for the gold rush.
I don't have anymore to say thats all I did.
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What I learned at the gold rush.
I hope you enjoyed the writing about what I learned at the gold rush.
Have you ever had a gold rush at your school?