по Kristina Young 8 лет назад
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Does the tone or voice shift? (examples: first person to second; formal to informal)
Does the writer sound sound pompous?
Does the writing sound too conversational?
Is the diction (level of vocabulary) appropriate to the audience?
Are there ambiguous referents?
Are key terms repeated for emphasis?
Are there numerous indefinite pronouns? Ambiguous pronouns?
Are the descriptions appropriate to the topic?
Is the wording precise and concrete?
Is there a sense of wordiness, such as tripping over long verb or noun phrases?
Are the main ideas of the sentences highlighted? Are the supporting clauses interrupting the idea flow?
Does the reader "gasp for breath" at the end of a sentence?
Are there unintentional rhymes or alliteration that work against the ideas?
Are the sentences appropriately varied?