por Vannessa Azpeitia hace 14 años
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intro:
topic sentence:Most people growing up can not wait to be older and move on in life.
1 discussion:For example teens can not wait to be old enough to drive a car or to get their own place to live.
2 Discussion:sometimes people get cought up in thinking of what they can do when they get older, but they forget to enjoy life in the moment.
gov.:Like Ben Hogan once said, "as you walk down the fairway of life you must smell the roses, for you only get to play one round."
trans: this means people should enjoy life as it is because we only get one chance at it.
thesis: That is why people should not jump ahead in life or forget we only get one chance at life.
TS:Jumping ahead in life is not neccesary because life is beautiful.
A) Getting married soon
1) marry to get out of parents home
2) not ready for marrage
b) Early families
1) young parents
2) more responsibilities
TS: Enjoy life because we only get on chanceat it.
A) Live in the present not always in the future
1) enjoy things at the moment
2) live in your era and pace.
B) Later realize you forgot to enjoy other things .
1) might realize you forget to enjoy other things.
2) Realize there is nothing to look forward to.
