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por Troy Troy hace 3 años

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Gold rush

The essay highlights a hands-on educational experience centered around mining, specifically focusing on activities like cookie mining and panning for gold. The introduction sets the stage for the learning activities that follow.

Gold rush

5-Paragraph Essay (Colored Coded Based on SUTW)

Your 5-paragraph essay consists of


1) Introduction


2) Body paragraph #1


3) Body paragraph #2


4) Body paragraph #3


5) Conclusion

I hope you enjoyed the writing about what I learned at the gold rush.

The last, concluding paragraph is also an important part of your essay. Use this strategy to create a strong conclusion:


  1. Restate the thesis by making the same point with other words. Remind your readers of the thesis, but say it in a different way than in the introduction.


  1. Summarize your supporting ideas. How did your 3 body paragraphs support the thesis?


  1. Connect back to the essay hook and relate your closing statement to the opening one. You can also leave your readers with a thought or question.


Have you ever had a gold rush at your school?

Gold pouches

Beeds
I don't have anymore to say thats all I did.
The color of the beeds are gonna be the town your gonna be in for the gold rush.
How to make them
After that you need to get the you beeds tied on the gold pouch.
You tie the sring on the lether in a species way I can't explain.
The first thing you need to do get a bunch of lether and lether strings and 4 beeds.

Mining

Fact #3

Now i'm gonna tell you about the gold pouches I made.

Detail 1
I don't have anything else for cookie mining sorry. Beause thats alll I did when cooki mining.
Cookie mining
Me and my group had gottan more cholites out ok the cokies than anyone else.
The hole point of this was to try to get all the choclite chips out of the hole cokie.
Today in are class we went mineing but not for gold for cokies.

Paning for gold

I don't have anymore.
Detail 3

Transition Sentence

Detail 2
I don't have anymore to say thats all that i did on the gold rush.
What you do after
And then shake the bottle and if you hear the the gold fastly moveing and you have to hear it to see if its real.
When you do that do gently move the gold to see if it was just sand and put it in water.
You look vary care fully for any sighs of gold flacks.
How to pan for gold.
And then you will see the water seperate the sand in a small pile.
Put some some water in the pan and swir it around in circles.
Get some sand for your pan.

What I learned at the gold rush.

A good introduction paragraph is an important part of your essay!


It sets up your argument and tells the reader what to expect.

The main goals of an introduction are to




All the things I did during the gold rush.