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not to go empty handed went to the bank of lake to stay there that night

disturbed by mosquitoes,they made fire which woke up the birds

hearing the birds cry they planed to eat young ones in their breakfast

found nothing , so went to the banks of the lake

The hawks and their friends

To name your story, you have to think about the overall message and what you want your audience to understand from the story. Also, make it relevant and easy to remember.

The hawks were grateful to their friends.They proved that "friend in need are friends indeed"

rescue the young hawks

The ending of a story is essential. We all know that if the ending is weak, what happened before loses its importance. So make it unpredictable, but fair. A resolved ending answers all the questions and ties up any loose threads from the plot.

father hawk went to get help from friends

This is the closure section of the story.
See examples of possible outcomes below:

• all problems have been solved
• it's clear how each one of your characters ends up
• your main character is transformed by the challenge

Try answering these questions in order for you to come up with a closure:
- Have all problems been solved?
- Is it clear what happens with all your characters in the story?
- Has the challenged transformed your main character?
- How do the characters feel in the end?

roared

hunters ran as fast as they could

dived into the water collected mud and put outthe fire

Try answering these questions to come up with a closure:
- Have all the problems been solved?
- Is there a clear picture of what happens with each character in the story?
- Has the challenge transformed your main character?
- How do the characters feel in the end?

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swiftly dived into the water

mother hawk was frightened to hear an awful conversation

This is the moment when the main character surpasses the last obstacle and finally faces their greatest challenge.
The climax usually follows one of these patterns:

• realization
• resolution
• choice

Type in your answer.

hunters

The middle of the story is where you add layers of complications that will lead to the end. Reveal more about the character's journey. Did their personality go through changes? How did they overcome the challenges? And as you build up the story’s central conflict, make it more personal to that character. Also, from the middle act, you have to lead into the final act.

evening

morning

Your character(s) need(s) motivation in order to solve the challenge(s).

on the lakeside

southern shore

turtle

northern shore

lion

eastern shore

kingfisher

forest

In the beginning of the story (or the exposition), you will need to introduce the setting and characters. You might also want to introduce the main conflict. This part of the story is important because it gives the reader necessary background information and maybe even a first insight into a character’s personality.

young hawks

so tender and loved their parents

mother hawk

The setting (time & place) of a story can change throughout the plot.

insisted father hawk to have friends

father hawk

Characters are essential to a good story. Usually, the protagonist(s) is/are the most affected by the plot. Introduce a character by focusing on their actions, interests, and occupation, as the physical appearance doesn't make a difference in most cases.

no friends

Type in the name of your character.