Marine Land

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Marine Land

Reflection

Being able use hand gestures throughout me entire presentation was something that I was able to do pretty well. When talking about the things that I liked to do at marine land.

I would like to improve my tone and to add more expression when I am talking. I wish I had talked with less of a monotone voice.

Non Verbal Strategies.

Being able to use my hands while speaking is a very important factor in being a good presenter. When presenting the information about the rides and my older family friends, I could use my hands and just not stand still, since this part of the story is not very funny or eye catching. The hands gestures, would be able to keep the audience kind of intrigued.

Purpose

Purpose is to allow listenrs to hear what happened during my time in Marineland along with the others in my story. I want to keep the stoyr short, but keep the message strong.

Verbal Strategies

I am going to speak with a loud voice that is able to get ot all of my audience. Having a consince voice that alows the lsiteners to actually hear what I am saying . Not having a monotone voice would be better for me and for my lsitenrs. THis would keep my audience for not getting bored. When speaking about the deers and how I was constantly pushed to them I could add more expression.

Audience

Class members. I will be sharing to my classmates and will be speaking not very formally, since this is not an informative text more of a personal experience.

Details

Getting inflcuced by my older cosuins, into going on the rides, even though I realy wanted to go meet the deers and pet them.

My father had told me than that I should never ruin someones else happiness, but I should mainly never make someone else happy at the cost of my happniess.

Went to Mainland In 2013. As a family, we were supposed to go to Sri Lanka for a month's trip, but that was cancelled, due to some of my parents work situation. Being able to go to Marineland, was supposed to be the greatest thing we were yet to do that summer,

My dad had realized that I was looking very sad near the end of the day, and asked me what was wrong. I had told him that I had missed out on meeting the deers, and he asked me why. I had explauned hwo the older cosuins pressured me into not looking at the deers and going on the rides. This has made him giggle and we had gone home. The next day, both my parents took me and my sister once again to Marineland to look at the deers