类别 全部 - achievement - rights - independence - suffrage

作者:Madyson Bone 3 年以前

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Vimy Ridge marked a significant milestone for Canada, symbolizing the nation's first major military achievement independent of British forces. This victory not only demonstrated Canada'

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Use this mind map structure to discover unseen connections, generate new ideas and reach a better understanding of any given subject.

Vimy Ridge

It tested courage of Canada as a nation because it brought the festering divisions between French and English Canada.
Vimy ridge was big for Canadians because Great Britain attempted to capture vimy ridge but failed. Canadians later on achieved vimy ridge which was the first time canada achieved something as their own country.
Vimy ridge was especially an important event in Canada making it how the Canadians wanted it to be.

Conclusion

In the conclusion you should have a brief summary of your key points.

Final Point

Emphasize how you managed to defend your main idea and goals along the essay.

Canadians wanted an independent country, vimy ridge helped them achieve their goal because they got a victory even after britain failed to capture vimy. It wa an especially big win because people have already attempted it, Canadians completed it. Making it important.Health care makes canada 10x better country because they pay for our medical expenses, which would be very expensive. Women sufferage helped inequality in canada helping canada be more freeing. Allowing so many more people, not just men but women to vote now too. This is important because politics did not just affect men. It affected women too, especially because they were women.

Women Sufferage

Allowing women to vote also drove them to be more independent because they didn't have expectations of what they did, wore.
Women suffrage got the 16th amendment removed, allowing women to vote finally. This make canada a good country because they are fighting for human rights when discrimnated against.
Canada's goal was to become an independent country, when women suffrage happened the purpose of this movement was allowing women to vote.

Health Care

The key points are the arguments which will support your thesis. These can be agreeing arguments or disagreeing arguments too, in each case they need to reflect on the main idea.

This reduces a lot of debt for many people because health care can get very expensive. Also reduces untreated wounds and illnesses because without medicare it would be too expensive to afford.
Canada introduced medicare in 1957, this allows canadian citizens to visit with a medical professional for free.
Canada takes care of their citizens.

Introduction

Summary

State the main idea of the essay. This will be your thesis statement.

add note here
Vimy ridge was an important historical event for canadians because it was there first acheivement as a country. Women sufferage was important because it decreased the amount of women being sexist towards.
Goals

In the introduction you should state the ideas what you want to defend along the essay.

Vimy ridge was important to canada because it was the first victory they won on their own.
Women sufferage
selfless citizens