by Dickson Peter 9 years ago
188
Rasbir
A student's field trip takes an unexpected turn when they encounter a bully named Buff on the bus. The student tries to navigate the challenging situation, only to be tripped by Buff, causing embarrassment.
by Dickson Peter 9 years ago
188
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Finally the teacher stopped her lecture about safety and you hopped on to the bus. There was only one bus left and many students. Buff was the meanest bully. He always picked on you. You walk near him to get to the seat across from him. Fortunately, he didn't say anything to you. Before you sit, Buff trips you. You fall under a seat. As all the students laugh you get up and find a seat. Before you could find a seat, the bus driver drove out of the school's parking lot. You get thrown into the back window as the bus moved. You make your way slowly to the front. You sit beside a lonely kid. You introduce yourself, but there's no answer.
You arrive at a bright forest. It looked like a painted poster. But it was real, Once you get out of the bus the teacher starts talking about our schedule. "First you are going to tour the forest outside. Then you are going to have lunch and then have some fun inside."
The adventure begins. As you proceed through the forest, you see a tree with a sign on it. You see that the sign is nailed on a very short, old tree. You go see what the sign says. You lean on the tree behind you before you read the sign. The tree slides up and it teleports you to another world.
Laying on the ground, you feel sick. You run and puke beside a tree. A boy full of cuts and bruises taps on you shoulder. "Hi, my name is Tim!" exclaimed the boy. "Follow me I can help you!"
Choice 1: You follow Tim.
Choice 2: You make excuses and refuse his help.
Choice 3: You don't answer and you walk away.
You make excuses and refuse his help
You walk away but Tim calls you. He says not to go but you don't bother to even listen. As you proceed through the weird place, you bump into something. "Hey. there's a wall here." You walk against the wall until you decide to meet Tim again. You go to the place where you met Tim but he was nowhere to be found. Then suddenly you see something in the tree in front of you. It was a squirrel. The squirrel looked evil because of it's glowing red eyes. Then you look behind the tree. You see Tim there. "Help me! The squirrel is gonna kill me!"
1. You run and help Tim.
2. You ignore Tim and stay by yourself.
You ignore Tim
You run and help Tim
Not noticing the squirrel, you head towards Tim. You run past the squirrel and reach Tim. "Are you alright?" you ask. "Ya, I'm alright." You look back and the squirrel is not there.
You follow Tim
The world looked so colourful, but felt so dangerous. Tim takes you towards a hideous cave. The cave looked like the world oldest rock with a big hole in middle. At the end of the cave, there is a bag of items hidden. He opens it and shows you the supplies. "Don't be scared I'm with you." "I have seen you somewhere?" You ask. "You sat beside me in the bus 10 minutes ago." Tim answered. The bag had a knife, some food, a small tent. Before he could finish the cave began to crack from the front. The mouth of the cave crumbled down. We were trapped in the dark and lonely cave.
Trust him and go with him.
You don't answer and you walk away
Tim says no don't go. You turn around and Tim frowns. You move on Tim shouts and says it's dangerous out there. You look at him and he was serious about the danger out there. So you see a unicorn.
Choice 1: you turn around and go with Tim
Choice 2: You go to the unicorn
You go to the unicorn
the unicorn tell you to come on its back. Then the unicorn starts to talk to you and
You turn around and go with Tim
Narrative continues
Choice 2
Physical description: includes clothes
Personality:
Past (how far back)
Present
Future (how far forward)
Main Setting:
You:
13 years old
Black shoes
Black pants
Purple sweater
He is a wise boy
He is a smart boy
Tim:
12 years old
He is a strange boy
He is a quiet boy
Unicorn:
8 meters long
White skin
Pink hair
Squirrel:
