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arabera Hannah Forrest 5 years ago

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Récit de sciences fiction

Dans un futur où les machines temporelles existent, une catastrophe menace l'existence de Brianna, un robot bienveillant. Brianna doit voyager dans le passé pour prévenir un accident tragique impliquant David, un jeune scientifique.

Récit de sciences fiction

Récit de sciences fiction

To name your story, you have to think of the overall message and what you want your audience to understand from the story. Also, make it relevant and easy to remember. Examples:
- theme: Audition, by Barbara Walters;
- main character's name: Robinson Crusoe, by Daniel Defoe;
- use of gerund to describe the plot: Waiting for Godot, by Samuel Beckett;
- time or numbers: 1984, by George Orwell;
- line that best describes the theme: Pride and Prejudice, by Jane Austen;
- key object or possessive in the story: Charlotte's Web, by E.B. White;
- story setting: Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea, by Jules Verne

Situation finale

OUTCOME

This is the closure section of the story.

David as constitue la robot et tout est bien

Try answering these questions in order for you to come up with a closure:
- Have all problems been solved?
- Is it clear what happens with all your characters in the story?
- Has the challenged transformed your main character?
- How do the characters feel in the end?

Dénouement

This is the moment when the main character passes by the last obstacle and finally faces its great challenge.

elle trouve la partie quelle as besoin de réparer la machine de temps

The climax usually follows one of these patterns:
- Realization (the character puts together all the pieces of the puzzle and solves the mystery);
- Resolution (the character needs to transforms itself during the confrontation);
- Choice (the character has to make a difficult choice).
Type in your answer.

Élément déclencheur

Obstacles

There wouldn't be any tension and excitement in your story if there weren't any obstacles that get in your character's way.

Motivation

Your character(s) need(s) motivation in order to solve the challenge(s).

elle droit le faire ou no elle vas pas exister

Why does your character need to confront this challenge? What does he/she expect to accomplish by solving it?

will marry in 3 dayshe/she loves the childcan fix the mistakes in the pastwants to help other misplace patients escapechance to win the World Chess ChampionshipOther
Péripéties

Each story has a main character and that character usually needs to solve a problem or challenge.The character's challenge is the one that creates tension throughout the story.

la machine de temps brise et elle droit la réparer

Type in any other challenges which the main character or other characters in the story need to face.

Brianna droit aider David pour que`il ne eu pas dans sont accident

Try to come up with an interesting challenge with which the character needs to struggle.

wakes up one morning in the middle of the oceandiscovers that his/her child turns into a werewolf at nightis sent back in time after rubbing an old coinis misplaced in a mental institutionbecomes blind before the most important game in his careerOther

Situation initiale

Lieu
Pourquoi elle reste dans la passé

Sensory details are important because they create depth in your setting. Choose the aromas, sounds, sights, things related to touch, smell and taste.

smell of fresh breadscent of freshly cut grassrain falling onto the windshieldbirds singingfluffy cloudsrural hillssticky honey on the tableclothstinging moustacheOther

La machine de temps brise

Does your story take place during catastrophic weather?

hurricanetornadotsunamiearthquakeflooddroughtOther
ces la soleil

The weather is an important element in your story because it can highly influence the ambience in the story and the mood of the characters.

L'automne

Each season has unique weather and events, whose description can also enrich your text.

SpringSummerAutumnWinterOther
2019 et 2062

What time of the day does the story takes place?

dawnmorningafternooneveningduskmidnighttwilightbreakfastlunchdinnersunrisesunsetfull moonOther
Dehors

Your story can take place wherever your imagination will take you to.

in a hospitalinside a carat the cinemain a restaurantat the zooin spacein an elevatorin an enchanted forestin the palm of your handin a haunted palaceinside an aquariumAncient GreeceBermuda TriangleOther
Personnage
David

Character's name


Type in the name of your character.

il est le gras que Brianna aide

Main goal


What is your character's main goal?

fight Evilfind lovedefeat his/her enemyrule the worldmake friendstime travelmake an awesome discovery

il est gentille

Garçon/humain/scientiste

Type of character


Decide what type of character he/ she is.

Protagonist (main character): Harry PotterAntagonist (main character's opponent): Lord VoldemortFlat (stereotypical character): Mr. Filch from Harry Potter sagaRound (his/ her personality develops throughout the story): Hermione GrangerStatic (his/ her personality doesn't evolve throughout the story): Professor McGonagollDynamic (dramatical change in personality): Neville LongbottomConfidant (the main character trusts him/ her): Ronald WeasleyFoil (contrasting character who enhances the personality of another character): Draco Malfoy
Brianna

Type in the name of your character.

elle veut remonter dans le temp pour aider sont ami

What is your character's main goal?

fight Evilfind lovedefeat his/her enemyrule the worldmake friendstime travelmake an awesome discoveryOther

Elle est un robot qui est gentille

Which traits best describe the character's personality?

introvertedloyalkindindependentquick-thinkingadventuresomeidealisticsweet-naturedcalmrisk-takercreativewittystrictfussyweirdclumsyharshaggressivecarelessclingingcowardlycrueldeceitfulimpulsiveOther

Fille/robot

Decide what type of character he/ she is.

Protagonist (main character)Antagonist (main character's opponent)Flat (stereotypical character)Round (his/ her personality develops throughout the story)Static (his/ her personality doesn't evolve throughout the story)Dynamic (dramatical change in personality)Confidant (the main character trusts him/ her)Foil (contrasting character who enhances the personality of another character)Other